英语兼职的优点

有利之处在于

第一，学生兼职打工，可以减轻家庭的负担。绝大部分兼职打工的中学生是为了减轻父母的负担而外出打工的。

第二，中学生可以通过打工锻炼自己。例如，许多中学生在外给低年级学生补课的同时，还巩固了自己的知识。

所以，通过打工，中学生不仅可以提前获得实现自我价值的机会，而且还可以培养团队精神和沟通能力。

第三，兼职打工还可以使学生体验到生活的艰辛。许多家长同意孩子打工。

有一个很重要的原因就是为了让这些从小衣来伸手、饭来张口的**、少爷知道父母赚钱的不易，同时让他们改掉花钱大手大脚、没了再要的坏毛病。而学生打工的过程中，更能体会和珍惜父母的养育之恩。然而，在这么多的益处下，中学生打工的弊处也是不容忽视的。

英语翻译：

First, a part-time job, students can reduce the burden of the family. The vast majority of middle school students in a part-time job is to reduce the burden of parents and migrant workers.

Second, students can exercise themselves through part-time employment. For example, many middle school students out to younger students make up a missed lesson at the same time, also have strengthened their own knowledge. So, through the part-time job, students can not only secure a chance to realize self value, but also can cultivate team spirit and communication skills.

Third, part-time jobs can make students experience the hardships of life. Many parents agree to children.

There is a very important reason is that in order to make the miss from clothing to hand and foot, master know parents make money not easy, and let them get rid of the bad habit of spending, didn't want to do a. And students in the process of working, more can understand and cherish parents' support. Under so many benefits, however, the high school students work cons also nots allow to ignore.

Nowadays, more and more college students to do the part-time job.

改成Nowadays, more and more college students are doing part-time jobs.

原因：表示现今的一种状态，用进行时。part-time job不是专有名词，无需加the，直接用复数即可；

But different people have different ideas.

改成 Different people have different ideas about the trend.

原因：but一般不放在句首，而跟在前半句后面。关于哪方面的different ideas需要说清楚。虽然我们心里清楚是哪方面的idea，但是写的时候一定要注意逻辑的完整性；

Some person think the part-time job occupy students a lot of time learning and many person put emphasis has been placed on it.

改成 Some person think that part-time jobs take students a lot of time to learn and many of them place objections against part-time jobs.

原因：part-time jobs改成复数同上。occupy常用的是occupy sth，而occupy sb. sth.并不常见，故改为take，固定用法为take sb. time to do. 后面的place emphasis没有根据，要表达的应该是强调反对兼职，不如改成place objections against sth. 最后的part-time jobs与前面一次出现距离较远，不建议使用代词替代；

Maybe some people because of poverty at home and part-time, this can still be. But to put learning in the first place.

改成 For those who live in poverty, taking part-time jobs may be a good idea to make a living. However, it must be put first to study.

原因：这句话整体中式英语倾向严重，同样的意思，需要用符合外国人习惯的表达方式。make a living表示谋生。it must be put first to study用了形式主语，同样也是为了符合习惯。put first=put at the first place；

Others think there are many benefits to part-time job.

改成：On the contrary, some other people think part-time jobs serve many good purposes.

原因：首先为了突出层次，前面加上On the contrary，即另一方面。Others这个词过于绝对。并不一定说没有不赞成兼职的人都赞成兼职，有可能很多人并没有表态所以 some other people比较严谨。serve many good purposes比较地道，偏向西式思维；

For instance, the ability to train people's, let the people as soon as possible to adapt to society and so on.

改成For instance, part-time jobs train people's abilities and help them easily adapt to the society.

原因：名词的列举一般用such as. For instance 一般加句子，且后面不加so on. 口语中偶尔会不自觉地加上so on，但那是不符合规范的；

In my opinions, a part-time job is good or bad, people should grasp the metric.

改成In my opinion, whether a part-time job is good or bad depends on people themselves.

原因：一点语法问题和中式思维，稍微改改即可；

Don't forget learn, student's main task is to learn. Now begin to adjust immediately! !!

改成：Never forget to study because it is a student's main task. Now it is up to you to decide.

原因：表示学生的学习一词是study. 最后的adjust immediately并没有依据，因为不是所有人都需要调整，也没有说清往哪个方向调整，不如说成decide，自己根据自身情况决定。

谢谢！